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♦ Đề thi Writing ngày 02/11/2019:

The world of work is changing so fast that employees cannot depend on having the same job or working conditions. What are the possible causes for the rapid change, and what suggestions could be given for preparing people?

♦ Bài chữa:

    * Mở Bài 

Paraphrase lại đề thi bằng cách dùng từ/cụm từ đồng nghĩa.

the world of work => the requirement of positions

fast => rapidly

Chúng ta có mở bài như sau:

There is a trend that the requirement of positions is changing rapidly, and accordingly it is prevalent for people to switch jobs. Several reasons could explain this phenomenon, and a series of measures should be taken to prepare for the career in the future.

    * Thân Bài 

Từ vựng cần thiết:

  1. Associated: liên kết.
  2. Advancement: sự thúc đẩy.
  3. Innovation: sự đổi mới.
  4. Chalk: phấn viết.
  5. Online grading systems: hệ thống chấm điểm trực tuyến.
  6. Bus conductor: người bán vé xe buýt.
  7. Three-Dimension Printing: in 3D.
  8. In advance: trước.
  9. Conquer: chinh phục.
  10. Theoretical: lý thuyết.
  11. Adapting to: thích nghi với.
  12. Take up: bắt đầu công việc mới
  13. Accumulated: tích lũy
  14. Specialist: chuyên viên
  15. Counterpart: bản sao

Chúng ta có thân bài như sau:

In terms of reasons, the first one is associated with the technological advancement. This is because with the prevalence of technological innovations, most work positions have applied certain technology to improve the work efficiency. For example, to teachers who worked in last decades, they use to rely on chalk and blackboard to give lectures; by contrast, in modern society, teachers are equipped with many electronic devices such a computers and online grading systems. Besides, with the wide application of technology in different vacations, some industries are disappearing, while new industries are emerging. One typical example of the former is bus conductor, compared to three-Dimension Printing, a typical example of the latter.

There are two aspects can be prepared in advance to conquer the mentioned challenge. For one thing, people can pursue higher education to be equipped with both latest skills and systemic knowledge. During the study in university, they can receive the thinking trained in theoretical subjects and master a competitive edge in adapting to the rapid technological advance. For another, people can take up certain jobs in the new industries as soon as possible. The earlier one steps in to the position, the more related working experience can be accumulated to be the specialists of certain field. Strong evidence can be seen in those who have started to conduct Public Accounts in Wechat, one of the latest and most common social applications among Chinese. They have won millions of fans online more than the new counterparts.

    * Kết Bài 

In conclusion, the changing working environment roots in the revolution of technology, which can be prepared by mastering new knowledge.

    * Bài Viết Hoàn Chỉnh

There is a trend that the requirement of positions is changing rapidly, and accordingly it is prevalent for people to switch jobs. Several reasons could explain this phenomenon, and a series of measures should be taken to prepare for the career in the future.

In terms of reasons, the first one is associated with the technological advancement. This is because with the prevalence of technological innovations, most work positions have applied certain technology to improve the work efficiency. For example, to teachers who worked in last decades, they use to rely on chalk and blackboard to give lectures; by contrast, in modern society, teachers are equipped with many electronic devices such a computers and online grading systems. Besides, with the wide application of technology in different vacations, some industries are disappearing, while new industries are emerging. One typical example of the former is bus conductor, compared to three-Dimension Printing, a typical example of the latter.

There are two aspects can be prepared in advance to conquer the mentioned challenge. For one thing, people can pursue higher education to be equipped with both latest skills and systemic knowledge. During the study in university, they can receive the thinking trained in theoretical subjects and master a competitive edge in adapting to the rapid technological advance. For another, people can take up certain jobs in the new industries as soon as possible. The earlier one steps in to the position, the more related working experience can be accumulated to be the specialists of certain field. Strong evidence can be seen in those who have started to conduct Public Accounts in Wechat, one of the latest and most common social applications among Chinese. They have won millions of fans online more than the new counterparts.

In conclusion, the changing working environment roots in the revolution of technology, which can be prepared by mastering new knowledge.

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