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♦ Đề thi Writing ngày 11/1/2020:

    Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business, while others think that it provides more business opportunities. Discuss both views and give your own opinions?

♦ Bài chữa:

    * Mở Bài

Paraphrase lại đề thi

There is a challenging issue about climate change in modern society. People have different opinions on whether climate change creates opportunities or deterrents on business. In my opinion, there are more promising opportunities in business due to the mentioned environmental issue.

 * Thân Bài

Từ vựng cần thiết:

  1. Deterrents: cản trở.
  2. Insist on: khăng khăng làm.
  3. Operate: vận hành.
  4. Transactions: giao dịch.
  5. Fossil fuels: nhiên liệu hóa thạch.
  6. Alternative energy: năng lượng khác không phải là truyền thống.
  7. Solar energy: năng lượng mặt trời.
  8. Solar panels: tấm pin mặt trời.
  9. Severe climate: khí hậu khắc nghiệt.
  10. Anti-smog: chống khói
  11. Witness: chứng thực.
  12. Particulate matter: vật chất dạng hạt.

Chúng ta có thân bài như sau:

According to some people, changing climate can indirectly increase the costs of enterprises. This is because a series of measures tend to be taken by the government. One typical policy is to raise the price of traditional fuels which are the main fuels of most traditional industries such as manufacturing. As a result, this ends in higher cost of production and lower profit if the manufacturers insist on using the traditional fuels such as coal and natural gas. If there is no evident global warming, the enterprises consuming traditional energy can operate at more affordable price.

 

However, I quite agree with those who think more business transactions can be created by the concerning climate. Firstly, when some companies are concerned with the higher price of fossil fuels according to the above statement, more companies benefit in the researching of new alternative energy. Once the energy has been altered from the original types to green ones such as solar energy, the cost can be controlled within a reasonable level and more companies including those storing solar panels can benefit from the new transactions. Secondly, the severe climate issues come along with the demand of many products. To take the anti-smog face masks as an example, in China, especially the major cities, anti-smog face masks witness the boost in sales in recent years, since residents rely on them to filter particulate matter when walking outside.

 * Kết Bài

Nhắc lại vấn đề và nhấn mạnh lại quan điểm của bản thân

In conclusion, climate change generates more opportunities in business in the end, but we should pay attention to improve the environment.

 * Bài Viết Hoàn Chỉnh:

There is a challenging issue about climate change in modern society. People have different opinions on whether climate change creates opportunities or deterrents on business. In my opinion, there are more promising opportunities in business due to the mentioned environmental issue.

 

According to some people, changing climate can indirectly increase the costs of enterprises. This is because a series of measures tend to be taken by the government. One typical policy is to raise the price of traditional fuels which are the main fuels of most traditional industries such as manufacturing. As a result, this ends in higher cost of production and lower profit if the manufacturers insist on using the traditional fuels such as coal and natural gas. If there is no evident global warming, the enterprises consuming traditional energy can operate at more affordable price.

 

However, I quite agree with those who think more business transactions can be created by the concerning climate. Firstly, when some companies are concerned with the higher price of fossil fuels according to the above statement, more companies benefit in the researching of new alternative energy. Once the energy has been altered from the original types to green ones such as solar energy, the cost can be controlled within a reasonable level and more companies including those storing solar panels can benefit from the new transactions. Secondly, the severe climate issues come along with the demand of many products. To take the anti-smog face masks as an example, in China, especially the major cities, anti-smog face masks witness the boost in sales in recent years, since residents rely on them to filter particulate matter when walking outside.

 

In conclusion, climate change generates more opportunities in business in the end, but we should pay attention to improve the environment.  

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