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♦ Đề thi Writing ngày 14/12/2019:

We are living in a throw away society and things are used in a shorten time and throw away. What are the causes of this phenomenon and what problems might it cause.

♦ Bài chữa:

    * Mở Bài

Paraphrase lại đề thi bằng cách dùng từ/cụm từ đồng nghĩa.

things => the consumer goods

shorten time => short period

Chúng ta có mở bài hoàn chỉnh:

It is true that residents become used to throwing away the consumer goods after using them for merely a short period. There are various possible reasons for this, and the detrimental influences are various.

    * Thân Bài

Từ vựng cần thiết:

  1. Regard to: về, đối với.
  2. Awareness: nhận thức.
  3. Factor: nhân tố.
  4. Implement: thực hiện.
  5. Policies: chính sách.
  6. Affordable: có thể chấp nhận được (giá cả).
  7. Durable: lâu bền.
  8. In terms of: về mặt.
  9. Negative: tiêu cực.
  10. Surge: sự dâng lên.
  11. Degradable: phân hủy.
  12. Landfills: bãi rác.
  13. Mislead: làm lạc hướng.
  14. Imitate: bắt chước.
  15. Behavior: hành vi.
  16. Overconsumption: tiêu thụ quá mức.

Chúng ta có thân bài như sau:

With regard to the reasons, the first one lies in the fact that individuals with weak environmental awareness live in a society without strict environmental supervision. Regulation is the main factors which is to blame for the throw-away society. Most countries fail to implement related policies shout recycling. In other words, it is legal to throw away the used products according to people's preference. Another reason can be observed in the quality and price of the products. This is because many daily products become more affordable but less durable. For example, children's plastic toys are easily broken after they fell to the ground once or twice. Parents are more willing to buy a new one instead of mending or recycling them, considering the cheap price.

In terms of the negative impacts, firstly, the rising number of thrown-away products directly ends in surge of wastes, including both degradable and non-degradable ones. The latter in modern landfills does not rot, threatening the environment. Besides, the habit of throwing away used products after a short-period usage can mislead younger generation especially children to develop a habit of wasting. Young people tend to ignore the reason why adults throw away things used for a short time, but blindly imitate the behavior to conduct overconsumption, such as buying new clothes and throwing away those whom merely once.

    * Kết Bài

Paraphrase lại đề bài + kết luận ngắn gọn về vấn đề.

>>> In conclusion, the habit of throwing the used away is due to macro and micro factors, resulting in severe environmental pollution and a waste of money.

   * Bài Viết Hoàn Chỉnh:

It is true that residents become used to throwing away the consumer goods after using them for merely a short period. There are various possible reasons for this, and the detrimental influences are various.

With regard to the reasons, the first one lies in the fact that individuals with weak environmental awareness live in a society without strict environmental supervision. Regulation is the main factors which is to blame for the throw-away society. Most countries fail to implement related policies shout recycling. In other words, it is legal to throw away the used products according to people's preference. Another reason can be observed in the quality and price of the products. This is because many daily products become more affordable but less durable. For example, children's plastic toys are easily broken after they fell to the ground once or twice. Parents are more willing to buy a new one instead of mending or recycling them, considering the cheap price.

In terms of the negative impacts, firstly, the rising number of thrown-away products directly ends in surge of wastes, including both degradable and non-degradable ones. The latter in modern landfills does not rot, threatening the environment. Besides, the habit of throwing away used products after a short-period usage can mislead younger generation especially children to develop a habit of wasting. Young people tend to ignore the reason why adults throw away things used for a short time, but blindly imitate the behavior to conduct overconsumption, such as buying new clothes and throwing away those whom merely once.

In conclusion, the habit of throwing the used away is due to macro and micro factors, resulting in severe environmental pollution and a waste of money.

 

 

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