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♦ Đề thi Writing ngày 19/10/2019:

The international committee should act immediately to ensure that all countries reduce fossil fuels, such as gas and oil. Do you agree or disagree?

♦ Bài chữa:

    * Mở Bài 

Paraphrase lại đề thi bằng cách dùng từ/cụm từ đồng nghĩa.

international committee => international organizations

should act immediately => should take immediate actions

reduce => cut down

Chúng ta có mở bài như sau:

Energy crisis has been a concern for many countries when considering the sustainable development in the future. It is thought that the international organizations should take immediate actions to persuade all countries to cut down the reliance on traditional fuels, such as gas and oil. In my opinion, I completely agree with this suggestion.

    * Thân Bài 

Từ vựng cần thiết:

  1. Necessity: sự cần thiết.
  2. Consumption: sự tiêu thụ.
  3. Emission: sự phát tán.
  4. Industrialized: công nghiệp hóa.
  5. Exploiting: khai thác.
  6. Rely on: dựa vào.
  7. Agriculture: nông nghiệp.
  8. Excessive: quá mức.
  9. Triggered: kích hoạt.
  10. Abnormal: bất thường.
  11. Sharply: nhanh chóng, mạnh mẽ.
  12. Achieved: đạt được.
  13. Discharge: thải ra.
  14. Absent: vắng mặt.
  15. Endeavor: nỗ lực.
  16. Futile: vô ích.

Chúng ta có thân bài như sau:

The first reason for the necessity of this practice is that cutting down consumption of traditional energy is one of the most effective ways to slow down the process of global warming. This is because coal, petrol and gas are the major sources of carbon emissions, which are directly related to the climate  change. It is surveyed that the industrialized areas where factories experienced an expansion in manufacturing by exploiting fuel resources contribute more to air pollution than those that mainly rely on tourism and agriculture. The excessive   burning  of fossil fuels has triggered abnormal weather. As a result, when measures are taken in time to control the consumption of this type of energy, the origin of pollution will be sharply decreased.

Secondly, only countries worldwide make joint efforts in taking the concerned efforts can the aim to stop global warming be achieved. To be specific, this social issue is not merely few countries’ fault. Although developed countries owning more private cars and factories discharge tones of CO2 by consuming traditional energy, developing countries also conduct a waste in this aspect due to their larger population and lower efficiency of energy use. In other words, if some countries become absent in this global endeavor, the efforts of other countries are futile.

    * Kết Bài

Nhấn mạnh lại quan điểm với vấn đề được đưa ra.

>>> In conclusion, in order to mitigate the global environmental problems, international organizations should immediately appeal to all countries to reduce and even abandon the usage fossil fuels.

    * Bài Viết Hoàn Chỉnh

Energy crisis has been a concern for many countries when considering the sustainable development in the future. It is thought that the international organizations should take immediate actions to persuade all countries to cut down the reliance on traditional fuels, such as gas and oil. In my opinion, I completely agree with this suggestion.

The first reason for the necessity of this practice is that cutting down consumption of traditional energy is one of the most effective ways to slow down the process of global warming. This is because coal, petrol and gas are the major sources of carbon emissions, which are directly related to the climate  change. It is surveyed that the industrialized areas where factories experienced an expansion in manufacturing by exploiting fuel resources contribute more to air pollution than those that mainly rely on tourism and agriculture. The excessive   burning  of fossil fuels has triggered abnormal weather. As a result, when measures are taken in time to control the consumption of this type of energy, the origin of pollution will be sharply decreased.

Secondly, only countries worldwide make joint efforts in taking the concerned efforts can the aim to stop global warming be achieved. To be specific, this social issue is not merely few countries’ fault. Although developed countries owning more private cars and factories discharge tones of CO2 by consuming traditional energy, developing countries also conduct a waste in this aspect due to their larger population and lower efficiency of energy use. In other words, if some countries become absent in this global endeavor, the efforts of other countries are futile.

In conclusion, in order to mitigate the global environmental problems, international organizations should immediately appeal to all countries to reduce and even abandon the usage fossil fuels.

 

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