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♦ Đề thi Writing ngày 21/12/2019:

 People spend less and less time at home. What are the reasons and what are the effects on the society and individual?

♦ Bài chữa:

    * Mở Bài

Paraphrase lại đề thi bằng cách dùng từ/cụm từ trái nghĩa.

less and less time at home => more time outside of home

Chúng ta có mở bài hoàn chỉnh:

It is true that people spend more time outside of home. There are mainly two reasons for this trend, which influences the society and individuals significantly.

      * Thân Bài

Từ vựng cần thiết:

  1. Fierce: dữ dội.
  2. Telecommunication: viễn thông.
  3. Devote: cống hiến.
  4. Invented: sang chế, sáng tạo.
  5. Attract: thu hút.
  6. Cybercafe: quán cà phê Internet.
  7. Perspective: viễn cảnh.
  8. Aspects: khía cạnh.
  9. Promoted: đẩy mạnh.
  10. Bound: kết nối.
  11. Accompanying: cùng với.

Chúng ta có thân bài như sau:

In terms of reasons, the first one can be seen in the group who are busier with work. Working overtime is the new trend in modern offices. For example, the fierce competitions in the Chinese telecommunication industry force many programmers to work overtime and even work at the weekend in order to launch the new product earlier than other competitors. As a result, most officers arrive at home later than before and even devote their weekend in office. The second one can be ‘seen in those who show stronger enthusiasm in entertaining outside of home. This is because a wide range of entertainments have been invented, which attract people especially the young adults to step out of home. The entertaining activities such as singing in the KTV, playing computer games in the cybercafé and travelling to other countries are more attractive than staying at home.

When it comes to the influence, from the perspective of the whole society, various industries can benefit from this trend. When employees spend more time at work and the young people attend more entertainment outside of home, the related aspects such as work efficiency.and sales can be promoted. However, from the perspective of family, the family bound can be weakened. Strong evidence can be seen in the trend that family. members meet less frequently with each other even when they live together. To be specific, young adults may arrive at home after old parents fall asleep. Children may celebrate the festivals with friends outside instead of accompanying their parents at home.

    * Kết Bài

In conclusion, the reasons can be subjective and objective with various effects on the society and individuals.

    * Bài Viết Hoàn Chỉnh:

It is true that people spend more time outside of home. There are mainly two reasons for this trend, which influences the society and individuals significantly.

In terms of reasons, the first one can be seen in the group who are busier with work. Working overtime is the new trend in modern offices. For example, the fierce competitions in the Chinese telecommunication industry force many programmers to work overtime and even work at the weekend in order to launch the new product earlier than other competitors. As a result, most officers arrive at home later than before and even devote their weekend in office. The second one can be ‘seen in those who show stronger enthusiasm in entertaining outside of home. This is because a wide range of entertainments have been invented, which attract people especially the young adults to step out of home. The entertaining activities such as singing in the KTV, playing computer games in the cybercafé and travelling to other countries are more attractive than staying at home.

When it comes to the influence, from the perspective of the whole society, various industries can benefit from this trend. When employees spend more time at work and the young people attend more entertainment outside of home, the related aspects such as work efficiency.and sales can be promoted. However, from the perspective of family, the family bound can be weakened. Strong evidence can be seen in the trend that family. members meet less frequently with each other even when they live together. To be specific, young adults may arrive at home after old parents fall asleep. Children may celebrate the festivals with friends outside instead of accompanying their parents at home.

In conclusion, the reasons can be subjective and objective with various effects on the society and individuals.

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