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♦ Đề thi Writing ngày 24/8/2019:

  Research can find new medicine and treatment, which are essential to health and disease. Who do you think should fund this research: the private companies, individuals or governments?

♦ Bài chữa:

    * Mở Bài

Paraphrase lại đề thi

Researching new medicine and therapy is becoming increasingly essential these days, since the patients’ condition has been more complicated in contemporary society. I strongly believe the government is the most effective resource of economic support to this project, comparing to business and individuals.

  * Thân Bài

Từ vựng cần thiết:

  1. Therapy: sự điều trị, liệu pháp.
  2. Complicated: phức tạp.
  3. Stability: sự ổn định, vững vàng.
  4. Funder: người cấp vốn.
  5. Enterprises: tổ chức kinh doanh.
  6. Clinical trials: thử nghiệm lâm sàng.
  7. Professional: chuyên gia.
  8. Ministry of finance: Bộ Tài chính.
  9. Inclined: có khuynh hướng.
  10. Suspending: đình chỉ, hoãn.
  11. Justice: công lý, tư pháp.
  12. Regulate: điều chỉnh.
  13. Ultimate goal: mục tiêu sau cùng.
  14. Based on: dựa trên.
  15. Affordability: khả năng chi trả.
  16. Subsidize: trợ cấp
  17. Obligation: nghĩa vụ, bổn phận

Chúng ta có thân bài như sau:

In terms of the stability of the financial support, the government is more reliable funder who can guarantee a longer-term support for museum than the budget from enterprises and individuals. This is because researching medicine needs to conduct large scale of clinical trials to prove or disprove the effects of certain medicine and pay the salaries of the professional and other employees. The government, as the collector of tax, is more financially powerful than other sectors. Meanwhile, it has ministry of finance to offer a well-organized and well-planned flow of money. When it comes to business and individual way, the former one is more inclined to pursue personal interests during the process of funding, while the latter have the risk of suspending funding.

 

Another reason lies in the fact that the government is a more justice party than other private sectors to regulate and supervise medical research. Evidence of this can be seen in the fact that companies and individuals regard profit maximum as their ultimate goal, while national funds give priority to public interests. Some types of research dominated by private sectors pay little attention to the benefits for whole society, such as unreasonable pricing, while the government regulates the medicine research based on various factors, such as the quality and affordability.

  * Kết Bài

Nhắc lại vấn đề và nhấn mạnh lại quan điểm của bản thân

In conclusion, I tend to think government is the best organization to subsidize medical research, taking the stability of funding and social obligation into consideration.

 * Bài Viết Hoàn Chỉnh:

Researching new medicine and therapy is becoming increasingly essential these days, since the patients’ condition has been more complicated in contemporary society. I strongly believe the government is the most effective resource of economic support to this project, comparing to business and individuals.

 

In terms of the stability of the financial support, the government is more reliable funder who can guarantee a longer-term support for museum than the budget from enterprises and individuals. This is because researching medicine needs to conduct large scale of clinical trials to prove or disprove the effects of certain medicine and pay the salaries of the professional and other employees. The government, as the collector of tax, is more financially powerful than other sectors. Meanwhile, it has ministry of finance to offer a well-organized and well-planned flow of money. When it comes to business and individual way, the former one is more inclined to pursue personal interests during the process of funding, while the latter have the risk of suspending funding.

 

Another reason lies in the fact that the government is a more justice party than other private sectors to regulate and supervise medical research. Evidence of this can be seen in the fact that companies and individuals regard profit maximum as their ultimate goal, while national funds give priority to public interests. Some types of research dominated by private sectors pay little attention to the benefits for whole society, such as unreasonable pricing, while the government regulates the medicine research based on various factors, such as the quality and affordability.

 

In conclusion, I tend to think government is the best organization to subsidize medical research, taking the stability of funding and social obligation into consideration.  

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