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♦ Đề thi Writing ngày 31/8/2019:

Some people think children have too much freedom. Do you agree or disagree?

♦ Bài chữa:

    * Mở Bài

Paraphrase lại đề thi

-> It is true that public museums and art galleries used to be the few places where people can appreciate historical relics and art exhibitions. With the revolution of information technology, it is thought that there is no necessity in maintaining public museums and art galleries. In my opinion, although the works and collections can be visited online, these buildings cannot be substituted.

 

  * Thân Bài

->Từ vựng:

  1. Relics: di tích.
  2. Exhibition: cuộc triển lãm.
  3. Revolution: cuộc cách mạng.
  4. Substituted: thay thế.
  5. Virtual: thực tế.
  6. The advent: sự đến, sự tới.
  7. Uniqueness: tính độc nhất.
  8. Irreplaceable: không thể thay thế được.
  9. Landmark: mốc ranh giới.
  10. Motivation: sự thúc đẩy.
  11. Immerse: đắm chìm.
  12. Atmosphere: không khí.
  13. Impressive: ấn tượng.
  14. Imperative: cấp bách.
  15. Embrace: nắm lấy

->Thân bài hoàn chỉnh:

Admittedly, using virtual exhibitions to replace the mentioned public constructions can save amounts of government budget. This is because when the advent of the computer and the internet has made it possible for people to pay a visit to the exhibition conveniently at home or in the office, part of the investment on construction and maintenance of public museums and art galleries will not be needed.

 

However, these are some uniqueness of museums and galleries that play an irreplaceable role in the contemporary society. Firstly, in many cities, it is the public museums or art galleries that play a role of a landmark, representing the cultural identity of the city. In other words, they are the tourist sites that attract visitors both from other cities and countries. If they are cancelled, there will be fewer motivations for tourists travelling from one city to another, Also, compared to watching the pictures online, visiting in person is more effective and direct. Strong evidence can be seen in the phenomenon that visitors can immerse in the atmosphere of the museums. The real objects exhibited tend to be more impressive than the virtual ones.

  * Kết Bài

Đưa ra kết luận về vấn đề.

-> To summarize, although the existence of museums and art galleries is challenged by the information technology, it does not mean that their functions should be ignored and denied. It is imperative to embrace the new technology with respect to traditional exhibitions.

    * Bài hoàn chỉnh

It is true that public museums and art galleries used to be the few places where people can appreciate historical relics and art exhibitions. With the revolution of information technology, it is thought that there is no necessity in maintaining public museums and art galleries. In my opinion, although the works and collections can be visited online, these buildings cannot be substituted.

 

Admittedly, using virtual exhibitions to replace the mentioned public constructions can save amounts of government budget. This is because when the advent of the computer and the internet has made it possible for people to pay a visit to the exhibition conveniently at home or in the office, part of the investment on construction and maintenance of public museums and art galleries will not be needed.

 

However, these are some uniqueness of museums and galleries that play an irreplaceable role in the contemporary society. Firstly, in many cities, it is the public museums or art galleries that play a role of a landmark, representing the cultural identity of the city. In other words, they are the tourist sites that attract visitors both from other cities and countries. If they are cancelled, there will be fewer motivations for tourists travelling from one city to another, Also, compared to watching the pictures online, visiting in person is more effective and direct. Strong evidence can be seen in the phenomenon that visitors can immerse in the atmosphere of the museums. The real objects exhibited tend to be more impressive than the virtual ones.

 

To summarize, although the existence of museums and art galleries is challenged by the information technology, it does not mean that their functions should be ignored and denied. It is imperative to embrace the new technology with respect to traditional exhibitions.

 

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