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♦ Đề thi Writing ngày 12/10/2019: More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need for printed books magazines and newspapers on paper. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

♦ Bài chữa:

  * Mở Bài

Paraphrase lại đề thi 

-> It is true that an increasing number of people search information and knowledge online with computers or laptops instead of traditional printed materials, so some people deny the necessity of printed books, magazines and newspaper. In my opinion, printed learning resources should not be cancelled due to their unique functions.

    * Thân Bài

Từ vựng cần thiết:

  1. Opinion: ý kiến.
  2. Argument: tranh luận.
  3. Adapts: thích nghi.
  4. The elderly: người già.
  5. Reluctant: lưỡng lự.
  6. Evidence: bằng chứng.
  7. Imitation: sự bắt chước.
  8. Exposed: để lộ ra.
  9. Spread: lây lan.
  10. Eyesight: thị lực.
  11. Embarrassment: lúng túng.
  12. Predominant: chiếm ưu thế.
  13. Necessary: cần thiết

Chúng ta có thân bài như sau:

-> The first reason for my argument is that not everyone adapts to reading on electric devices. Some groups such as the elderly have already become used to reading printed books, magazines and newspapers, which are the sources where they receive information. These people tend to be reluctant to learn how to surf on the internet to search information. Strong evidence can be seen in the fact that many old people only use smart phone to make a call. Another typical group should be those who are concerned with the radiation of computer screen. Many people have to work with computer for several hours a day and want to read printed stories to reduce eyes imitation instead of keeping being exposed to screens. If all the information is spread through electric device, people's eyesight will suffer more burdens.

 

Secondly, it is an undeniable embarrassment that the access to internet has not equally bean spread all over the world. This is because online service is only available in advance countries and in some major cities of developing and poor countries. For example, in some mountain areas in China, there are no signals for mobile phone, let alone downloading information. For people who live there. traditional printed books are the predominant source of knowledge, which should not be ignored. This is why many celebrities and charitable organization mainly donate books to them instead of computers.

  * Kết Bài

Nhắc lại vấn đề và nhấn mạnh lại quan điểm của bản thân

-> To conclude, although information technology makes it possible to access information online, printing books magazines and newspaper on paper is also necessary.

 * Bài Viết Hoàn Chỉnh:

It is true that an increasing number of people search information and knowledge online with computers or laptops instead of traditional printed materials, so some people deny the necessity of printed books, magazines and newspaper. In my opinion, printed learning resources should not be cancelled due to their unique functions.

 

The first reason for my argument is that not everyone adapts to reading on electric devices. Some groups such as the elderly have already become used to reading printed books, magazines and newspapers, which are the sources where they receive information. These people tend to be reluctant to learn how to surf on the internet to search information. Strong evidence can be seen in the fact that many old people only use smart phone to make a call. Another typical group should be those who are concerned with the radiation of computer screen. Many people have to work with computer for several hours a day and want to read printed stories to reduce eyes imitation instead of keeping being exposed to screens. If all the information is spread through electric device, people's eyesight will suffer more burdens.

 

Secondly, it is an undeniable embarrassment that the access to internet has not equally bean spread all over the world. This is because online service is only available in advance countries and in some major cities of developing and poor countries. For example, in some mountain areas in China, there are no signals for mobile phone, let alone downloading information. For people who live there. traditional printed books are the predominant source of knowledge, which should not be ignored. This is why many celebrities and charitable organization mainly donate books to them instead of computers.

 

To conclude, although information technology makes it possible to access information online, printing books magazines and newspaper on paper is also necessary.

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